Analyse:
combination between facts, own opinion and own experience.
Intro about where the exhibition is located. and her feeling and experience with that place.
What is the argumentation: ?
What makes the article interesting or fun to read? Or why not?
She is good in combining facts with her own opinion. its in a balanced way. its fun to read because she wrote it a bit like a story.
What do you miss? What would you change?
I like the intro but i don't get the fast connection of her how she gets to the exhibition when she wrote the second paragraph.
Exercise 2